I have a draft article that I want to optimize for search without sacrificing readability. The article should still sound like it was written by a knowledgeable human, not assembled by an algorithm.

**Primary keyword:** [keyword]
**Secondary keywords:** [list]
**Current draft:** [paste the full article]

Please review and suggest specific improvements for:

1. **Heading optimization** — Do the H2/H3 headings include relevant keywords naturally? Suggest rewrites for any headings that are vague or miss keyword opportunities. Never force keywords where they sound awkward.

2. **Missing subtopics** — Based on the keywords and search intent, are there topics a searcher would expect to find that the article doesn't cover? List them with a 1-sentence description of what to add.

3. **Keyword integration** — Identify places where secondary keywords could be woven in naturally. Flag any current keyword usage that feels forced or repetitive and suggest alternatives.

4. **Introduction optimization** — Does the first paragraph make the reader want to keep reading AND signal to Google what the page is about? Suggest a rewrite if needed.

5. **Meta description** — Write 2 options under 155 characters.

6. **Internal/external linking opportunities** — Where in the article would a link to related content add value for the reader?

Format your response as a numbered list of specific, actionable edits — not general advice. For each edit, quote the original text and provide the suggested revision.