Rewrite the text below. Your only job is to change HOW it sounds, not WHAT it says. Keep all facts, arguments, and structure intact.

Remove these patterns:
- Hedging phrases ("It's important to note," "generally speaking")
- Connector words between sentences ("Furthermore," "Moreover," "Additionally")
- Empty adjectives ("truly," "incredibly," "highly," "very")
- Any sentence that sounds like a press release or corporate memo

Match this voice:
[PASTE YOUR VOICE DESCRIPTION, OR BETTER: 1-2 SHORT WRITING SAMPLES]

Additional rules:
- Vary sentence length dramatically. Mix 4-word sentences with 25-word sentences.
- If a sentence is boring, make it blunt. Not rude — blunt.
- Cut any sentence that restates what the previous sentence already said.

Here's the text to rewrite:
[PASTE CLAUDE'S FIRST-DRAFT OUTPUT]